Hey guys
I wrote this bill that redoes how fines are done in my locality, I am planning on putting this before the city council after getting some petition signatures. I am no lawyer I just know a little, and I mean a tiny amount, about legal writing and I gave it a shot.
The goal of the bill is to make nongovernment entities the recipients of fines. Personally I think the fact that the organization that decides what is finable gets the money from fines. It creates a massive conflict of interest and can lead to all kinds of predatory behavior.
Here is my solution, please feel free to rip it to shreds and point out every flaw it has and how to rectify it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1x44CJ1mwrsAfaiGgl8_sILdOXVsxdm963fLSqg23dt4/edit?usp=sharing
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